After reading Victor's essay, I wanted to sit down and cry. Five points for Victor! The terminology used was very advanced and is the kind of vocabulary that should be used in an AP course. I fail to use such words that enhance my vocabulary, but I will try in my future papers to use bigger words and to sound more intelligent. I also liked his use of symbolism. I felt that he adapted it well to the books and explained them thoroughly. He made clear connections and did not use fluff to fill up the essay. He also completed the quota on quotes :P Overall, I thought it was a very good essay.
This is funny. Please feel free to hyperlink Victor's blog.
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